penix@lemmy.worldtoWorld News@lemmy.world•Boy, 7, dies after falling from ferry and mother killed trying to save himEnglish
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1 year agoThey should have let her save him.
They should have let her save him.
What you’ve written sounds clunky and weird. It’s like, you can embody something, and you can be living proof of something, but saying someone is “trying to embody living proof of [something]” is a mistake an alien pretending to be human would make. 😉
I’m just saying that people intentionally trying to sound poignant and profound often do not.
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If I have seen further it is by standing on the shoulders of giant retards.
The convergence of “man, some wild ass shit is happening to me I’m noticing” and “check your damn CO levels bro” posts continues.
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